Femme Fatale(Acrostic)

by PS   Apr 2, 2006


Fatalistic nighttime lover i am, my dearest man,
enchanting is what i am
my piercing eyes reflect my deepest self
my lithe body moves not like any other
every burning star glitters in my mind as we dance

For here you are hunting for a love
Although you search for a gentle soul
Tonight you find another, a fighting woman
All night you'll hear the music of my shimmery hair
Lovers tonight, the fairys twitter around us
Ephermal breezes whistle and rustle our souls.

-Acrostic Poem-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roopa

    This is a wonderful descriptive poem! good work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Cleverly done..havent seen many poems done like this in a while. Some colourful language choices....I loved it few spelling mistakes like "nighttime" but its awesome...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Excellent Acrostic Poonam, Maginficent work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Very good, I haven't really seen many take that point of view before. It is pretty short but it is very good, maybe lengthen the second line by like two words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great job... 5/5 keep it up!

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