Comments : My Paper Heart

  • 17 years ago

    by SingleWing

    Wow that was rele good, is it true? It was put together PERFECTLY and all fitten flawlessly. AMAZING 5/5 keep it up and stay together xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    This is an amazing poem, with a wonderful ending. so emotional, touching, poignant, excellent, what else can i say?? =P 5/5 and three thumbs up,
    keep writing, u have talent,
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow!! This poem is great!! Better then great! It left me speachless. I rate it 5/5 higher if i could. This is totally great!! Your an excellent writer!!
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by x0xlivelovelaugh

    Its amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    OMG!! this is reallygreat! i like how u made up the storydrawing a paper haert and at the end, the real heart! this is awesome! great job!!!! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    I'm speachless too!! That poem is GREAT!!!!! I haven't ever seen anything like it!! Kepp up the work!

  • 17 years ago

    by TiMe hEaLs aLL wOuNdS

    Wow im not surprised u have this many comments at all since this was an amazing poem that keeps u interested the whole time!!!1 amazing job keep it up!!!! it was very deep!! 473674637648383474863487643/5 lol im adding u as a favorite :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Shelly

    I thought because you helped me i help you..thanks for helping me im going to give it a try...well im going to try love myself well try cant guarantee anything...anyways your poem was great it showed how you got you heart broken so easily it had heaps of emotion it was great

  • 17 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    I've decided your an amazing writer and that poem is amazng, there was a shakey stanza that didn't quite rhyme that good but other then that it was beautiful. from start t finish.

  • 16 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    I LIKE THIS POEMS ITS SO SAD...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK YOU HAVE BE DOING AND ALSO I LIKE YOU POEMS CAUSE I THINK THEIR TRUE FEELINGS!

  • 16 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Such an eerie poem but really good to read. love the imagry of a paper heart and love how u ended the poem. a true story. x

  • 16 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Such an eerie poem but really good to read. love the imagry of a paper heart and love how u ended the poem. a true story. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Clown

    Hey there Sierria, I dont know if u remember me, its been awile sence Ive been on, I just read this poem, and I love it, ur a very talented poet, ur skills have imporved sence Ive been away, I just got back from Iraq and this poem really brought me back to Amarica. so wuts been up

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    =0 i love it! wow. 5/5 <3

  • Dude thats sooooo deep but i love you oodle(sp)) haha

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Omg. i love this poem.
    itz filled with such emotion.
    ndd i get it completely.
    im going through that
    for the past 2 years.
    but 5/5. :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    Another amazing poem!!!
    5/5
    -Jazmin

  • 16 years ago

    by Mia

    I am halfway torn. On one side, I wish that I had never read this poem because it pulls memories out of the shadows that don't belong no where else. On the other side, I love it. I loved the word choice, the flow, just everything. Thank you for sharing.

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow
    5/5
    cant say nething more
    its all been said

    ^_^
    stay well

    xx