I love your poem!!
it is so good!!
and it seems kinda like you have basicly explained something that i have been going thought aswell!!
if you ever wanna talk about it then just give me a shout!!
and i hope you don't mind if i put your ;poem on my space because i love it so much!!
cya

Omg i love this poem.
you know if you ever need to talk to me you have my msn address or just send me an e-mail.
keep your chin up hun!!
5/5 love jess XxXxXxXx

Dude this was a really well written poem! You have captivated sometimes what I feel!! Well great job
I really loved it keep it up!! And thanx for you advise!! And when you need anyone to talk to just look me up!!

Exactly how i feel.

but Mark, you don't have to change for me. or for anyone. you're great just the way you are, and i love you.

good poem, keep it up. =)

This is sad *tear*

But like I said in another poem, You gotta digg deeper! Tell me what you've given up. How it feels to be all alone, Why do you push your friends away. Just a bit of a tip, It helps the reader understand it alot better :P