by roisin Apr 2, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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I yank your head back by your hair |
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It was okay...not really that great for a vampire poem. Some nice imagery but still there's this sorta lack of emotion or hook that brings a reader into it. Okay but not great. Still the imagery had been really strong. |
by tiffanny
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This poem gave me chills. very good writeing! |