This poem is just absolutely amazing. great job!!! 5/5*

Deep Emotion...Very Touching!

This poem is beautiful.
Very emotional.

Thank you for my comment =]

Kaytiexxxx

Nicely worded. There is such sadness and sense of defeat. But a hope that things can change. ;)

By your quotes, urm, this is hard to ask, are you a certain way around... stuff? Lol. God i'm making NO sense. I'm refering to the imperfection/perfection quotes.
If you still dont have a clue, just ask and i'll just blurt it out.

Lots of love, me. xxx

I rele like this poem its great

A nice and concise poem, though its quiet sad, awesome finishing lines!

Bloomin marvy schteffi! as always xxx