Hey u

Now i really liked this one, it flowed really well, nice to read and got the feelings through.

Gave this one 5/5 dont normaily give that high but think this one should be a 5.

only one thing, i think it you should of stoped at "my new life was done" with out the "to this day.." at the end.

But still really enjoyed it!

Hey, thanks, glad u liked it!!

Hey, I love this poem, I have been like that before, and I love the way u captured that so perfect, It was so easy to follow......gave it 5/5
thanx for commenting on my poem.

I think that woz a really good poem

Hey hun,

i really like this poem it's got alot of feeling in it well done

I really LOVED!!! this poem.5/5 its great

Loved this poem. many people will be able to relate. five all the way! keep up the good work

Great poem sooo good!!

This is great....way better than nething i could ever rite

You are so young but have so much potential dont give up you CAN achieve this new life xxx alex xxx

I really like your poem, I can connect with it alot -xxx-Steff

I really like this one too!:)
*cindie*

I can so relate its scary i loved it great job!

Hey awesome job keep up the good work

That's kOol! =) great peom!