Breathtaking imagery! You have a wonderful way with words...
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wonderful penn, this poem has a certain sweetness to it which I liked, great job!!!

Had great wording but i couldnt the rythm an the flow was a lil off

nice write
4/5

~GLASS~

Beautiful Title....Beautiful Poetry

What a wonderfully written peice of poetry. I loved it. you Rythme and Flow is amazing. Good job!

~Joe~