Comments : Sickening Torture

  • 14 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow.. I really enjoyed this poem.. Its short but sweet well its sad but you know what i mean ;) its short but its still really well written. Great flow and I liked how you put in"I felt them all." etc afterwards.. great ending! awesome write ;)


  • 14 years ago

    by Celina

    Wow...that's deep...but good...actually...great!

  • 14 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    That was Awesome!!
    like short but you got everything out!! Good job!!


  • 14 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    Really short
    really awesome
    good flow and rythm

    nice write


  • 14 years ago

    by 111308

    Wow Very Deep And Short And So Emotional I Love It!

  • 14 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Wow, I love it. It's short... but its to the point. It kind of reminds me of some of the things that I've gone through. It flows together perfectly. 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 14 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Short and sweet with lots of goodness packed in! the flow is very well done. xx

  • 14 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Really powerful peice, short but very strong. the feelings are vrey pronounced in this and the words well chosen and smoothly run into one another. super peice of writting


  • 14 years ago

    by PS

    Its nice a short and really emphasizes the hurt. nice

  • 14 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Short and sweet.
    Brash and cutting.
    Real and raw.
    This poem did it all....

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 14 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    WOW that was really good short but great 5/5


  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, For such a short piece, It was brillant. Filled with alot of emotion. A really good job! Keep it up! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 14 years ago

    by amber

    Wow i like it short but powerful you are a wonderful poet

  • It's short but it gives me a I can just feel what you're can hear it.

  • 13 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very short, but great write! Very understandable.

  • 13 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Angie --
    Now, THiS, is a poem of great rhyme. I could tell where all the rhymes were coming, and the flow was good as well. I liked how it was just one long stanza, it added a nice twist. Most people really don`t do that. This poem was short, so, not much to comment on. But it was great. I`m happy I got to look into your work! 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Very emotional, very deep and heartfelt, really sad and excellently written.

  • 13 years ago

    by amelia

    Short & sweet
    amazing poetry
    keep it up