Wow! it was realy good! And ur incredibly sweet. Im missing you too.
Love always,
Mel

Wow! great job...keep it up...XOx Laura Marie

Aww...nice work...i loved it...keep it up..love dia mwaz xoxo

Wow lol for a dufus brother u can write! LMAO! well kepp it dufus love yas

much love ur lil sis : )P

The last line seemed odd...but i loved this..i love alliteration and comparisons..it brightens up the poem..wow great jobb..5/5!

ur sis lissa