Comments : Fate of A Soul Mate

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    I've thought that, aswell.. But, I don't know.. it's all a little hard to know if they're a soulmate though..

    I don't use this kind of style myself a lot, but maybe try and write sentences or something.. like, not break up lines..

    I dunno really.. don't take my advice.. I'm not the best writer.. lol.. good work ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Yes, I do believe that there are soulmates. I really liked this poem, it was sweet and unique, and it also makes the reader wonder if they too believe in that stuff. =) Keep writing and take care!