Hey!!! this is a brilliant poem, i really felt the pain and the sadness in this write. It is really good hun!!

Keep up the good work! 5/5

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This is an awesome poem. you have a lot of talent. I read a lot of your quotes and loved them also. great job. keep writing.

Amazing!!!!!!!!!! I KNOW WHO U ARE!!! ur lisa!!!!

I really like this poem alot u have a great talent i love your work

Wow, very very good poem. 5/5. You do have talent, and it reflects how I feel as well. Good work.

Hey youv been on my fav list 4 agers i was so glad to see you had written a new poem i really luv this one i exspecially luv this bit :
Why she hides, I can't say.

Why she cries, why she aches.

Why she sits by the mirror,

While her hurting heart breaks.
well done!!!!

luv always monique xoxoxox

Absolutely beautiful i love it

I expect to see something,

Behind those brown eyes,

But they just stare back,

While my soul slowly dies.
^^this was my favorite part.ive felt like the way your poem describes so many times.and ive done the same thing,just staring into the mirror.it does get better:Dit was absolutly beautiful work.
--lexie

Mmm...Long...Unique...Well written great word choices and descrition. It's amazing, I love it.

WOw. Such a sad poem, and sadly I can relate. I thought you expressed your emotions REALLY WELL in this piece. I loved it from start to finish. Not a thing I would change either. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Wow, I really loved the way you put this together. You are very talented with words. I love how you use the analogy that there are two of you. It was very good! Keep up the good work.

~BJ~ 5/5

I really think this is great! the flow, rhythm, rhyme are all good and I love the story the poem tells, I can relate to it so I understand it. I hope you are ok... Well done
- Polly

Another Excellent poem the flow and structure was really nice and the emotions were very clear!

-AnnMarie

Another great poem, u have really great words to describe ur thouthts as a poem

Aww.. that was good.. there were a few stanza's that weren't as good as the rest but that just leaves you room to improve.. some of them just seemed to fly by flowing very well and containing so much meaning.. nice job! 5/5

Beautiful job! You've got talent!

Wow, i like this one!!

Another 5/5, i can relate 2 this poem because i feel the same n it never changes.

Wow. That was really good. The emotion and depth you put toward this piece was AMAZING. Lovely job!

It had sad emotions in it! mmm... it was good really good! you know how to write your poems!

Keep it up!