I liked this alot, it was very moving. 5/5

Wonderful, again. It's a really powerful poem, with a desperate edge to it. (Desperate as in, the person in the poem is desperate for somebody to see the pain they are in, not desperate as in you're desperate, lol).

Anyway, excellent job.

Very nice poem! It was long but worth the read! Great job.

-AnnMarie

I did not think that it was long. i felt that it was the appropriate length. it was a very beautiful piece of poetry and the words just flowed wonderfully together. great job. 5/5

I luv it

Again, Another chanting flow, I truely liked this piece. The spacing of the lines had a great effect. To me this poem wasn't long what so ever because I didn't get bored and feel as if I wished this poem hurried up and ended. From start to finish you had me enchanted with this piece. Well done. ~mel

Hey nice poem, i enjoyed reading it. i can relate to it, its like you're you but in the end you don't know who you really are., 5/5.