Hopefully death takes a while till it comes to you hun! I'm so sorry you are feeling a bit down, but its good you let people know not to be sad for you. My mom is the same way she wants people to rejoice that she's in heaven. Let writing be your escape instead of death, it seems to be doing you good!
Keep writing!
Love always,
Chelsey-Lynn

Wonderful job Mary, enjoyed the write!!!

How powerful a write this is..... its sad yet beautiful. Wonderfully written and its flows perfectly......

So sad, but so beautiful and full of strength. I love the third stanza and the last line is perfect, great job!

Heartfekt and touching. Youa re very talented.
This ending could not have been more perfect.

True that Death will have claimed my life
but I've long since given you my soul.

Truly a worthwhile read!

This is beautiful!! So heartfelt and moving. The whole poem made me smile all the way through. Truly beautiful piece...

A very heartfelt poem. Looks like I've missed quiet a bit of your poems. I loved this one, I really hope you're feeling alot better.

True that Death will have claimed my life
but I've long since given you my soul

Absolutely brilliant!!!

Love
Michelle

Thats a really good poem... well done

Hey hun!

Omg I can't believe this! I just wrote a poem, and I added it, and the title is "when I die"
Then I saw you at this frontpage with a poem "when I die"
O.o that is so scary haha! Well I read your poem, it's different then mine :P So don't worry haha
And it's also a lot better then mine.

I loved it sweety, it's a wonderfull poem, I really really really loved every part of it! Even every word.

Another fantastic poem

Love you!

Lotsaaa love
-xxx-

Great poem, i thought it was really good.
xxx

THiS iS REALLY GOOD.
i LOVED THE CERTAiN MOOD YOU HAD THE AUDiENCE FEEL.
MAYBE YOU COULD READ A FEW OF MiNE

This is very good!

Wow this poem is so awesome it goes with all the lines!! I wish I was as good as u!!