Comments : The Silent Closet..

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is amazing, Luke. I love the theme (I never would have thought of it) and how everything flows so nicely from one event to the next. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    That'll teach him! I've seen video clips that are exactly as you've written this! Superb my friend, I knew I would miss your poetry :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Luke, I am amazed....... you took the title and really ran with it! Did you post it in the challenge on the big boards???? I love the approach you took with this one.... it flows and rhymes perfectly. You have come along way baby......... love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Luke that was a wicked write. I love the topic you chose. The flow was non stop from beginning to end, it all just came together so nicely. I sometime am left wondering how you come up with some of your topics as i also like to write about topics that most have not touched or are perceived as out of the norm...lol Anywyas excellent poem once again! 5/5