Comments : Have You Ever?

  • 17 years ago

    by arunima gautam

    Well it seemed more like a story telling poem. but still it makes up some great content. try to rhyme it a little and make it flow. i do feel some amazing talent of poem writing in you. keep it up. and write more and more. good luck.

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I love this poem very much, im glad to of read it