This poem is very unique! And i loved how you wrote it. You changed tences a couple time thought, somtimes you were in past tence and then changed to preasent.

But it was a bad thing that we whistle with out mouthful
^^ don't you mean Our insted of out?

Other than that keep writting, I'll definatly read more of your work!

Hahaha thats a very great and talented poem :)