Hey Nikki. this was powerful, you picked the right words for every line. I love the title. Take Care XXXXX
JL

Damn... Powerful and beautifully written. The flow was awesome and your words so wonderfully chosen. Very enjoyable read!

Hello gorgeous! Wow, your poems really never cease to amaze me. You have such a beautiful way with words and such powerful forms of expression. You really write with your soul, and with the kind of passion that makes true poetry. Sorry if I sound like I am gushing, but I was very touched by this poem among many of the ones you have written. Keep writing love.

-Tainted Mikochan

I swear...everytime I read a "piece of you" I unknowingly hold my breath. It's amazing. I don't think anyone else's poetry has done that to me before.

Wow that was a powerful poem
really well written

I love this poem!! The words you use are just superb! I look foward to reading more and more of your poems 5!
-Kristin

:O.. Uhm wow, im speachless. It was the best poem ever. WELL DONE. you truely have talent.

This is absolutely beautiful!!! i love it! keep it up.

alwayz,
*ophelia*

WaAsSuUp?
Your poem is great! you remind me of my cousen.
Keep up cos you're a poet and you should no it!

Simply amazing....!!!!

WOW! This was truely good! You expressed so many emotions! I loved it!! 5/5 Keep it up =]

luv natalie x-x

WOW....that was amazing

Amazing.
this poem is so incredible i cant find words to describe it.
i know exactly how you feel.
im going through the same thing.
blah.
wel keep writting
your poem honeslty left me speechless.

♥

Oh, my................