Hey awesome poem....

I loved the biginning its true to me! gr8t poem keep it up! ^_^

Very good peice, not really sure why it has such a low rating... its very well written ad constructed.

Master, I can't figure it out Either, I mean my comments all say it's good, yet it's my lowest ratted poem.

That was amazing and i loved the plot! thx for ur comment and i will keep reading urs if u keep writing them....
love ya lots,
sore