This poem has nothing to do with anyone i know or met

I like your poem, i hope you add more, i think for only being 14 your getting off a pretty good start.

And yes my poem is true, and as a matter of fact she is lonely, i was her only REAL friend, and now she has none. she blew me off cuz her asswhole b.f dont like me, and i dont like him.

A well expressed poem, Keenan. You chose certain atmospheric details to use within your writing, although to improve this poem, I would try and involve some variation throughout the stanzas. For example, stanza nine seems too unrealistic. With the use of emotive language, you could enhance the feeling within that aspect. Overall, a good write. Well done =).

Much love and God bless,
Fallen.

I rated it excellent because you deserve it. I liked it very much even through the pain. I hope you keep writing hun. You are great. :)

Out of all the ones i lykd dis one hehe...

Wow... i loved it. great poem! 5/5
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This is a really good poem keep up the good work!!

This is a really good poem keep up the good work!!

I love this poem 3 words keep it up

Another very good poem keenan, came together very good, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Its interesting how some of the best poetry comes to us at our darkest times

Its one of my favs..

Wow

Wow excellent poem thanks for the comment on "My Journey"

This is really good keenan =] 5/5

Keekee! i loved it! seriously truley anyother thing i dont remember??? o honestly i do! it was a great poem! i enjoyed it very much!