I like the rhyme scheme you used, it really adds to the overall effect of the poem.

Absolutely love it.
It was a very original way to express that ending. I had a mental picture, which although disturbing, proves how well this was written.
Well done
>torn -x.x.x-

Well written dark poem with a strong message

You almost make me believe that you have overdosed before, and knowing you I bet you've come close. Good poem man.
-Backwoods