Wow! great poem hunni! thnx 4 the comment on mine! =)! nice 2 know r work is appreciated aint it?!!
luv always xxxx

Well written, nice piece.
As always~ Kate

Interesting, I liked it. Interesting use of the decaying metaphor. I wonder was the flatlining a metaphor too or real?

Very sad but heartfelt. I like it a lot.

~Em