Thats a very nice poem

Lol...this is a very funny Poem. Awesome Job. Keep up the great work.

LOL. i liked the ending. very comical. Rock on!
-Suzie

Lmao!! Halarious Poem! Awesome! Keep it up! bye
xxx
*van.e.ssa
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Okay that's kind of a gross topic, but it funny. Well written too.

Lol great job, take care sarah x

Ewww..I almost puked!! This is hilarious!

LOL

Omg! i'm lmfao!! hahahah! that was just excellent! i loooveedd it! definetely a favourite! nice job! 10/5

It is really funny!!! I laughed so hard!!
The poem's structure is excellent!
i like it really~hehe

*smiles*
like I said unexpected poems.
ha ha
i liked it.
5/5
~Wings