Great Poem! I love it, i love how it has the mixed emotions...like...how yuh first showing hope then in the end your showing you still love the person...great job!!

Hey I liked that. Especially toward the end. You talked about how much pain he put you through and how much you wanted to forget him but in the end you're still in love. Nice. 5/5
-Vino

YO LIKE DAT POEM

I love the way you come back to the fact you'll always love him/her. very good poem!!

well done!

lonelynow x x x x

Great poem. I really like the rhyme scheme you have going in it. Keep up the good work.

Hey thanks for the comment on my poem! Love yours!
5/5
-Rachel

I really liked your poem, it's so sad but so tender at the same time. It's lovely, I liked the whole poem. I think it expressed perfectly that sometimes you can't stop loving someone even if that person really hurt you.

Great job! 5/5

I love this poem its as gd as ur others keep it up!

I'm going to find myself another boyfriend.
Yeah! That's what I'll do.
But as I lie next to him at night,
I'll be wishing he were you.\

^^^ I think this stanza throws off your poem just a tad bit... I loved the first stanza and this whole poem actually, but you talk about how you want to be soooo far away from him then you say you'll be wishing your new boyfriend were him....I think its ok to keep that stanza..maybe just add another stanza to lead up to that cause it was just kind of thrown in there! I really truly liked this poem..Liked your rhymes! still 5/5
-Krissey

Aww, I loved that poem so much! It was so sweet, I hope you manage you move on and forget about him/her though. Thanks for the comment on my poem.

--Steph

Great feelings. you showed nice talent, keep it up.5/5

I enjoyed this poem it reflects the affect that being in love has on you: havin someone constantly hurt you yet loving them just the same....4/5

Ace poem love 4rm lucy x x x

Ummm, Bloody Marvelous! 5/5 job from me the 1st stanza was the best