HEY ANOTHER AMAZING POEM FROM YOU!! GREAT WORK!!
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I really like dark poetry and this one is one of the best keep it up! ^_^

"Dreading tomorrow
And hoping this storm will pass through the night
When my mind's still awake
But my body sleeps tight
And I fear that this storm
Will bring floods and despair
Because I created this monster
That will destroy what was there
You will feel it inside
Because this storm is yours too"

^those^ are amazing lines, i loved them, and they flowed nicely. =)

i really liked the whole plot/idea of this poem. you're a good writer, Mark. and you're improving. you'll have your awards in no time. =P

i love you.

Wow..i love your stuff..u r really talented!