Stealing placebo's pitch with the french
very good
got a tune?

I could actually hear the song while i read it. great rythmn! and i must admit that i love this poem!! very deep. keep it up! and welcome to the club :D hope you enjoy!
-xXx-

Wow, amazing Job. Make it a little long and it will be awesome. I like the flow of it. Keep up the good work.

~Joe~

Really liked it!
Welcome to the club sweetie!
btw thanks for your help with the myspace..my name thingy is now anna_petunia..weird i know..dont ask:P
talk to you soon..xoxo

Yet another great job 5/5 take care sarah x

Agree with the above, perhaps lenthen it a bit....still very good....

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow. I really like this. its difently an amazing write. you should make it a bit longer,id love to read back on it. great.

Kat

You have very strong meaning in your poems and this is one of those poems were it is easy to undertsand

I love this poem a lot or i mean song..you might want to write chorus and verse on it though so people will know...but again great song!

Its good, well done

AMAZING WORK!!! absolutly love it, the flow and set up were perfect.. wouldnt change a thing, keep it up!!