Look, you cant turn to self-abusive crap for help, it never does...so i hope you havent started this stuff, and if you have, you have to stop.

on a brighter note, great poem haha. i like the rhyme scheme, and how it rarely faltered...keep up the great work

I decided that i should pay more attention to your poetry. after all you read so much of mine and i don't give back much. this was a good poem and thankyou so much again for reading so much of my work and commenting and rating on it. it means a lot to me. i liked how you kept the rhythem in this poem. in a few of mine i tend to let it slip because i want my point across more than i want my poem to rhyme. but then there r those lucky poems that seem to have a bit of both....well anyways i'll give you a four on this one. i want to give you a good reason why it's not a five but i think it's just because i'm use to longer ones. it can be hard to not keep a poem simple though. i like a chalange though and try to create a long one that rhyms and sticks to the point. well anyways c ya...oh silly me...i've seem to have put a five in instead of a four...oh well i put u off to a good start even though i'm the fourth voter. ^_^ if i liked short poems i'm sure i would have wanted a five in the first place. c ya.

Hey i loved your poem! it was great everything flowed i didnt care for the topic and im not sure if anyone does but it turned out great you have a special talent keep it up 5/5

5/5 Poem, with a 'I hope he's not..' effect. Wondering... The basic thing to thoughts. Great flow, and I love how the third stanza cuts in. The topics a bit hard for me to talk about without falling into repitatoin or get off track about the actual poem. The fourth stanza makes the reader really think, and it coming right after the third creates some thing good, it's it's own depressed/hopeful/deadly way.

Love always ~Purple~