Awesome. :)

Strong and simple, the way i love em to be. what a great write dearie, i really enjoyed the read.
-keeping in touch,
love aylee

Wow this is also a great poem. life gives us so much drama but we have to learn how to deal with them. thx 4 ur comment the poem "goodbye" talks about how i feel in love with some guy and he pretended to be my friend, i say pretended because he told me that he would of been better without me so yeah thats what it talks about

Good poem.

I really like this! Good job!

This poem is great

i think most females feel like this in there life time
the trick to over come this feeling and then you find who you really are

the poem was great also the flow was too

well done!!

lana

Very nice and the repeating effect worked very well...nice and the structure was good too...thx for ur comment,
love ya lots,
sore

Very lovely dear.
And thanks for commenting mine
5/5 for sure lovey!