AWESOME!!! keep up the great work. loved it. 5/5. nice flow and use of words.

You have left ne speechless I really loved it! You really know how to write! Were you mad when you wrote it? Well any ways the emotions were powerfull! 5/5 ^_^

I can feel the anger it's very clear and visible. I feel this way about a few people right now as well, so as I read this one it makes me feel all my anger at once. Very well written with excellent description and imagery. Loves it! 5/5