I like how you go thruough the trees to desrcibe all the stuff thats going on

Good poem Poonam. Could of been a bit longer though.

Beautiful Rhyme Royal... You've conveyed everything so wonderfully!

I realy like this, what with being a country boy, trees hold a certain quality for me, they are something of great repect, power and might, however fallen as well; they are magnificent, i like to refer to them where i can.

yes, this is a lovely rhyme royal, well done!

Jon

Lovely, well put with an almost fairy tale story narrative
Well Done

Sondos

Really nice, good word usage, great work!