"Sharp slashing steel silver blade; a sword
carried by the man in black cloth"

i love those lines the best in this poem, maybe because it has a sword.

Hey the poem was good but isn't hero 2 syllables??

Good job.

Intriguing thoughts. The piece was interesting and well done. Your words were nice.
~S3I -Faith

This is wonderful... A hero's poem... :)

Not bad at all.. Im not sure what you could use for the last line.. Id say "brave" would fit, but i dunno since you already used it a few lines above. but its just a suggestion ;)