Wow that was reallly good I wish I could write like this. Good rhyming and perfet word usage. It was really good 5/5 for u chicka :D

Lataz
|MIA|

Dat was gud!..I loved it...5/5

x3Melissa

Your detail in this was amazing
Great Job..
Terrifically written
Excellent rhymes
Good Flow
all around great poem
5/5
~TPOMH~

When I part from you
My love will linger on
Just like the dew on the grass
When night turns to dawn

Great job! Again you have such a way of words..chow! :D