All I need is one glance...

by Tripp   Apr 9, 2006


I merely need one glance
at your beautiful face
to know that when i took the chance
it was worth it

Asking you to be my girlfriend;
a choice that I\\\'ll cherish
\\\'till my life\\\'s end
and never forget

the great things you\\\'ve allowed us to do
without you I would be lost and empty
a ship without a crew
sailing on dark lights, and no mast

this ship would surely hit a whirlpool
be pulled and sucked under
into the oceans depths so cold, and so cool
never again to surface

A life without you,
would be an earth
without a sky that was blue
and hills that were green

every moment I spend around my amazing girlfriend
is perfect in every way
and I wish that it would never end
but sadly, all good things must come to a close

So as I wrap this up, I hope I\\\'ve made my point
that my love for this girl
gives me a high better than any joint
she\\\'s my best friend, and I LOVE HER

ehh not my personal favorite...you all tell me what you think ;-)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Ur rhyming scheme definetly took a turn but it was kool....instead of girlfrend use a more vague term next time....all in all, grrt job, especially w/ the metaphors....
    love ya lots,
    sore

    p.s. it was grrt talking to u...

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I love it its true, diff style but i lik it.

    Lissa