Miss you

by disha   Apr 9, 2006


There are so many stories I still want to tell
There are so many I love you's left unsaid
There are many tears left uncried
There are many dreams left to fall apart

I miss our long talks
I miss the nights when all was alright
I love you like a sister, you were my angel,
Yet I wonder why you left me here to die

We were forever best friends-
When one fell to the ground
The other one was there to help her back up.
We healed our broken hearts
With a hug and a gentle smile.
We stayed up every night looking at the stars,
Giggling like little girls and having midnight talks.

You said you had to go-
I wished it wasn't so.
You said we'd always write.
You said it would be like old times.
I looked in your eyes as you looked into mine,
With smiles like everything was fine.

Yet we both knew well that this was our last good-bye.
We knew that we would never again
Have those long talks and play like little girls again.
We knew all the pain we'd cause ourselves.
I also knew that my angel was being taken away,
Yet we promised no matter what we'd remain forever best friends

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katz

    I can sort of relate to this, having a friend so far away is always hard, my bestfriend lives in America and I live in New Zealand! Quite a far way to travel :( it's hard but you gotta hold on if they mean that much to you! well done with this poem, it's very deep!

  • 18 years ago

    by disha

    Thank you so much ppl. n Daniel i m just 17 n i just express my feelingson a paper--never took it as a serious job--thts bad i kno but it is like tht..i love writing therefore i do.i need improvement n i m overwhelmed i got someone to critique me.
    thnx everyone--really

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey welcome to this site, its so nice to see so any Indians showing up the art of poetry. U really write beautifully and it was a great experience to go through this one.

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Osiris

    I certainly wont say this was "one of the best" poems in the Friendship section, rather, this is "the best" poem in the Friendship section. You've very clearly sent the message you wanted to send through your poem, there is absolute expressionism in here. It's a about a girl friend of yours, your words say it all.

    I wont prefer suggesting anything to you, 'cause I find it written differently. You just made everything flow out of your heart, so it hardly matters whether you change the format or not. Keep up the good work. And the rating meter here sucks, I would have given you much more than just 5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Osiris

    I certainly wont say this was "one of the best" poems in the Friendship section, rather, this is "the best" poem in the Friendship section. You've very clearly sent the message you wanted to send through your poem, there is absolute expressionism in here. It's a about a girl friend of yours, your words say it all.

    I wont prefer suggesting anything to you, 'cause I find it written differently. You just made everything flow out of your heart, so it hardly matters whether you change the format or not. Keep up the good work. And the rating meter here sucks, I would have given you much more than just 5.

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