Comments : Without you i am nothing (for a contest)*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by rachyBBY

    Cute poem =]] well written, this is exactly how i felt about my ex. not anymore tho =]] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Very lovely and cute one

    love

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Excellent poem - unfortunately, the last stanza crashes it a bit with poor rhyming - it may be better if you cut the last stanza out all together . . other than that - the poem was absolutely amazing! Incredibly well written.

    Peace. [Sole]