This is a good poem i like cuz in my life that is how my friends are sometimes

Yea this one is really good i like how you detailed the people on how you think of them well yea keep up the good work

Thank you, i no it has heaps of mistakes i only went to school untill i was 12, hense the grammer. thank you tho.

Dude that was AWESOME ur so good im so jealous.lol
keep writing cuz ur great

Hey thanks for the comment =]
i think ur poem would be better...if u took out the last two lines...the ones that say "you've done us a favour,coz we deserve better than that,
we aren't there to be stepped on like we are your door mat!"
i think itd be better taht way
~christina

Love it!! I'm going through this one now. I love your use of words!!! 5/5