Greaatt Job

Is it a reflection from up above?
Or is it from down below?
Nobody really know's
But I have done this before
And I am a Pro

This poem had me a lil confused..
It was good until and i am a pro
that caught me off Guard
is there another Message in this poem thats like a secret one??

Great poem Though
5/5
~TPOMH~

A)Title Love it. For the contest right?
B)Concept: Sort of confusing in the second stanza. Doesn't really have one which is why it must be in this section?
C)Emotional Element: isn't really clear.
D)Over all: It's confusing with the repetiveness witha line in one stanza reflecting another.
I start to see the bigger picture
I can't beleive it is me

I look into this shinny glass
and I have to agree
That it looks like me

I got it at the end of the poem though.

Great poem well writen

Sumthing different it is!
nice job
and congrats 4 winning my contest Joe!

Wow

Another excellent job 5/5.. your an amazing poet..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

(Got it right this time with the signature.. :)

Nicley written -

I look into this shinny glass

is that supposed to be shiny glass?
(Only one n)

Other than that - the flow worked pretty well - and the rhyming was interesting. I just thought that the poem only really scratched the surface, and only dug a little deeper towards the end . . .

Peace. [Sole]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY jOE!!!

keep up ur gud work dear!
all the best to u!

luv,
Bharti

Hmmm....I guess it was all right. Not a style I really enjoyed but there were some great lines and the wording was cool. Different than it first appeared.
~S3I -Faith

O.o nice but weird poem! Good ending..keep it up =) luv nomz xo

Nice! i must admit i got rather confused, but i love poems that make me think! the imagry was fantastic. thanks so much for your comment!

Ruby

Nice ended with wonderful poem, good ryhme with beautiful penned..

Love & peace.

bert.

Great job, keep it up

Good one

Hmm... Good Job... Kinda slightly confusing but a great poem. I think I got it by the end. But confusing is good... I get easily confused lol.
Keep writing Joe... you're good. MWa loves n hugz ttyl xoxo
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