What i want

by holly   Apr 10, 2006


I never wanted to want you
i never wanted to need you
i never wanted to love you
i never wanted to depend on you
i never wanted to hold you
until that one day
when you took my breath away

now i want you
now i need you
now i love you
i depend on you
i want to hold you till i have no breath at all

i want you to want me
i want you to need me
i want you to love me
i want you to depend on me
i want you to hold me
i want to take your breath away

i want you boy
i need you boy
i love you boy
i depend on you
maybe one day boy maybe i will hold you
maybe i will take your breath away

**i didn't know if this is any good its just something random that came to me while i was waiting at a bus stop so i thought id put it down**

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Not bad for a spur of the moment thing! Most of my poetry is written whilst im on the move too. It was quite catchy almost like a song..well I made up a tune...hehe

    I think you mean 'your' instead of 'you' in places...

    Welldone!

    [lostlaureate - come find me]