Wow, this poem was very well written. Awesome Job.

~Joe~

Ohhhh Bert, such a beautiful write. You are the sweetest soul and I hope you know that. I always wish life to be happy for you....Please write more I love to read your work....take care

Love Ann

Wow this is really lovely
amazing

**smile**

I like this but could i suggest putting more breaks in!! it is nice how it is but i think that that would improve it!!

Still gave it a 5 though

Wow, this one made me speechless, i wish i could have such talent that you have, you are great..........5/5

WOW, this is a very well written poem.
In a way, it reminds me of my relationship with my love. You've written a poem that others can connect with and that symbolizes others love for one another. Again, a wonderful write.

[[welcome to my faves.]]

5/5