That is so good i wish i could write that good

Not much left to say. Everythings already been said about it. Its just wow. Amazing. i really wish i had your talent. I would love to write like you. Bravo, you did a wonderful job!!

Amazing! The wordplay and rimes or incredible!

Wow, thoughts of a dead and broken heart!

Awww
that was sooo amazing.
loved it.
awesome poem!

I love your poem

I like how this poem flows and rhymes very good job!

Wow that was awsome I loved it 5/5 for sure

This is really good keep on going

Love it it was truly good poem I glad I read it twice thank you
5 FOR SURE

I love that i can feel your pain and sarrow trew your poem

AMMMAZING! This is such a gudd poem! |totally jealous|
//lambchop\\
mwahh

I love this poem. it is so nice

Wow great job i absolutly loved it

This is a very sad poem....who did u write this about and y?

my favorite part is

so hollow
so alone
embraced by my broken heart
since true love is gone
fading like a rainbow
from the edge of horizon
screaming for acceptance
alone i burn

WOW!!!! This left me breathless, motionless, and speachless altogether!! no joke!!! It's hard to keep back tears after reading that!!! You portrayed the image of a broken heart SOOO well...better then i've ever seen it portrayed before!! This poem has got to be one of my alltime favorites!!! No joke!!! Thank you so much for your comment on my poem about my grandpa...you made me feel a lot better!! Thanks so much!! This poem is soooo amazing...definate 5/5!! keep up the good work!!

Wow.
that's all i can say; just wow. i can really feel the emotion...especially in the last stanza.
amazing...i hope that one day i can write as good as this...
5/5
Lauren

Wow................what else is there.......I really do like this poem and it is just screaming to me sorrow and pain and i love it again another superb poem 5/5

Wow!!! congrats! u won 1st place!!!! u can check it in my contest. great poem, i love it! it's great, awesome, it has EVERYTHING!!!!!! good luck! :)

Nitin
This is very sad for a love poem. Love the imagery and word choices. Excellent!

another tomorrow
another deception
with same mirror
and a dying reflection
craving for a smile
in love's misconception
crippled within myself
awaiting salvation

Hoping for the day your reflection is smiling back at you :)
Love Cindy