Comments : WHY DID YOU MAKE ME LOVE YOU?

  • 12 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Ok...I'll explain it in details..." Sometimes U think that U can't go on wz somebody or u get bored so U feel like u wanna go away or know somebody else..and here the guy discovered how stupid was he and that he is still in love with his girl friend when he saw her dying in front of his door..and she did so bcoz he left her alone"..end of story..

  • 12 years ago

    by Hebe

    Wow.. that was amazing.
    Now that is deep love. Can't discribe what I feel actually.. a shock, sadness, it's very touching..
    Very well done!
    5/5
    Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I love this poem the drama the intensity i love it perfect! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by NoUr

    I really enjoyed reading it..a romantic tragedy i see..keep it up ya shimo ;)..stupid boys :S..

  • 11 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    This was such a unique poem i loved how you went back and forth between the guy and girl it added your own twist to the form of the poem
    the ending was sad but so realistic i mean this could happen so much these days
    great job! 5/5 : )

  • 11 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Oh. Shit. man. this was just amazing... Im like speechless. WOW!!