Ok...I'll explain it in details..." Sometimes U think that U can't go on wz somebody or u get bored so U feel like u wanna go away or know somebody else..and here the guy discovered how stupid was he and that he is still in love with his girl friend when he saw her dying in front of his door..and she did so bcoz he left her alone"..end of story..

Wow.. that was amazing.
Now that is deep love. Can't discribe what I feel actually.. a shock, sadness, it's very touching..
Very well done!
5/5
Take care

I love this poem the drama the intensity i love it perfect! 5/5

I really enjoyed reading it..a romantic tragedy i see..keep it up ya shimo ;)..stupid boys :S..

This was such a unique poem i loved how you went back and forth between the guy and girl it added your own twist to the form of the poem
the ending was sad but so realistic i mean this could happen so much these days
great job! 5/5 : )

Oh. Shit. man. this was just amazing... Im like speechless. WOW!!