Very good Poem, Sophie!

Can't wait to see more!

Wow! u is wicked writeer! i wanna read more of ur poems :D:D:D:D:D happy easter

For a 13 year old, I am VERY impressed. I'm amazed at how well you grasp the reader with the rhyming couplets and how the emotion sinks in to your writing. Great job, well done.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen*-

Awe its cute
keep working on poem
-harley-

You said you can't write poetry, this is awesome! Well done, a nice read

THis is soooo good .....keep writing!!

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Omg u think u cant write...this is ur first poem...n it was hell good...it was better then my first poem lol...keep it up...u have talent just keep practising n u'l get there...love dia mwaz xoxotake care

Heyy!!
this is an awsome poem!! heyy u left and i never had the chance to say thanx for stickin up for me in that chat!! well ur a rele good writer! thanx agian!! xoxoxo

Heyy!!
this is an awsome poem!! heyy u left and i never had the chance to say thanx for stickin up for me in that chat!! well ur a rele good writer! thanx agian!! xoxoxo

Awww that was really sweet. Well done babes. Write more though

Take care

Alex xxx (mum) lol

It really seems right from the heart, keep that feeling, it's wonderfull

WOW that was great!!!!!

I really loved it! Hope i get to read more!

5/5

It was very well written, i enjoyed reading it very much. its really heart felt. good job keep it up.

Wonderful!! I had the exact same experience! i hope everything works out for you! Your a great writter!

♥ Tara ♥

You mean so much to me,
I want us both to be set free,
From life with misery and pain,
To a life with no more rain

wow... that really pulled me in and made me feel what you felt!

all your poems do that though, and i love them all.

keep on writin'!