Comments : Dealt A Bad Hand

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    OOOO babe this is such a sad poem.. i know how you feel though..i am here for you!

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Wow that was inspirational

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    The rhyming was excellent, it would make a great song give or take a few verses . . . The flow was amazing, and the meaning really deep - awesome poem loved it.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is a great inspirational poem. a great poem to put hope into people. wonderfull

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I liked the meaning behind this one. I think that you should keep up the good work. 5/5

  • I loved the meaning behind this poem!!! It was sensational!!! Wonderful work!!! Keep it up!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ReBecca

    I've read a few of your poems sean. your write well, and most of your poetry has a good message or gets your feelings across without alot of confusion. keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very inspirational last line, is this poem true?

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Still missing something.
    4/5
    im sorry im being vague but I guess its missing the descriptiveness you usually add to it.
    ~Wings