Different but excellent hun!! this is really really good i liek ur flow and style its perfect xox me

I really liked this one huni....5/5

nami

It's really sad. but it's so well written and i luv it off course!!!
sammi

Dis is how i would describe my best friend im definitely feelin dis

This reminds me of me. Beautiful. I really loved it. Its perfect, everything..
Its sad and hopeful.
AmZ xx

I loved it =)

This poem touches every broken-hearted person...and i guess..it will surely inspire them....just keep up the good work....

Cute

Wow that was awsome. and alot of people fel that why. wanting to get out and be free. but never do anything.awsome.please check out mine. i love hear what you think about it.its call I SEE by: bianca.its kinda has the meaning like yours

....and please, keep it down, dear Soul........

It's kinda like how i feel...i luv it..5/5 luv ur writing...keep it up=)..

with lots of luv

BeautifulDistasterXoXoX..

Good work, that was really sad and well written....5....

First of all let me say...your amazing!
i have read a few of your other poems and they all are just brilliant!
you can express your, lets say, 'no so upbeat' emotions in this most beautiful ways.
great stuff!!!!!

**smile**

Hey i just love all of your poems they are all awesome :)

Wow girl! that's serious! ur life is much to special to throw away if that is what you are getting at. God has a plan for you and idk if u believe in him but he is my best friend and without him i could have never got through all the stuff i've been through. you've got talent alright...just let the good shine hun! All for him! -erica (if u have ne questions just email me! n thanx for the comment!)