Haha the first time i read this poem i was like "ain't" isnt a word. but then i reread it and all in all it is really good. you've improved a lot. like ur poems were good be4 to just u know the more u write the better it gets. havent commented on ur poems in a while. thx for commenting on mine but geez u gotta vote 2. lol

p.s. on myspace u wrote ur fav. candy is chocolate. just so u know chocolate isnt candy. lol

Wow.. that's all I have to say lol:P luv ya hunn don,t stop writing;) Zazoo -xxxxx-

Hey hunny

What a fantastic poem. No no no the description doesn't fit at all. Ýou're not that kind of person at all! =) The Steph I know is so much more then what you say "ain't you"

I can relate to this by the way. I often feel this way aswell. Sometimes it's like a drama movie haha. And I can't believe I'm part of it.

Very well done once again sweety. I loved it so much!

I just read your canvas poem again. I love that poem so much. I paint myself, so I can relate to that poem.

I would love to make a painting and paint it all black, and then write
"this painting is my life, and it's black"
~Steph~

I have serious thoughts about that! And quoting that phrase with your name.

I love you work hun, I really do! And I'm so glad you wrote something new!

Very well done sweety

Love you!
-xxx-

Hun, I made such a terrible mistake. The "canvas" poem is not yours. God I am sooooo sooooo soooooo sorry!

I am so ashamed, I better go hide myself with my head as red as a tomato. I am so sorry for thinking that poem was yours, it just sounded so much like you!

I feel like such a bad person now. I am so sorry!

I will finish the painting but quote;
"you made a wish, but she shooting star fell" ~Steph~
Because I think that's the most fantastic part of your poem "Mistakes"

Hun, I hope you can forgive me *offers a bouquet of flowers*
I am so sorry! I won't even confuse your poetry with others no more! I promise!

*hugs Steph!* You must have been so confused reading my comment ^^^

Oh sweety I love you so much! =*( Sorry for the confusion.....

Love you and hope you still love me too! =*(

-xxx-

Hey hun!
this poems ..well...i love it, it has wit and pride...very clever
take care my dear,

xxx

Wooo
steph this poem is amazing!

theres so many different powerful detail in it
it deffinatly would get people thinking
that you are a great writer
keep it huni sweetie
loves ya xxxxxxxx

Good one, making it sounds the opposite yet r talking about u actually, hmm...nice try...I love it, it flows smoothly...

I don't know if you remember me but we used to comment eachother's poetry a lot. i went by eckoz i believe. do you have a myspace? if so you should add me.

www.myspace.com/emo_buddi16