Careful of spelling mistakes ;O)
Besides that its a beautifully written poem keep it up :o)

I dn't care about your spelling mistakes you still get the meaning of the poem even with the mistakes.... they give a poem character... and i loved it.. you sholdnt have gotten a 1.0 on this... it deserves at least a 4 or 5. defiantely a good one... i liked it a lot.

Aw... That's a sweet poem! Good stuff. Btw, I live in Castlemaine, Victoria. An hour and a half out of Melbourne. You've never heard of it 'cause it's a hole lol. Where 'bouts do you live? Keep it up! xoxo Harris