All looked at me with the sympathizing eyes,
as they could feel that i was in pain.
But you did not even turned to see my tears,
but you thought it was just another rain.

very heartfelt stanza
hope u r doing fine
good poem

all the best and take care
5/5

Leaving my hand in the crowded world,
you swept away like the wind blows.
I kept searching you till the distance,
may be you are standing so close.
My heart started bleeding,
My eyes started crying,
My tears started flowing,
And my soul was dying.
All looked at me with the sympathizing eyes,
as they could feel that i was in pain.
But you did not even turned to see my tears,
but you thought it was just another rain.

this poem brought tears to my eyes.
thoses stanzas were the best of them all.i felt every word u wrote.the whole poem flowed very well too and the ending was jus really sad but it was very emotional and u gave a very strong view on this poem.i loved it alot. 5/5. ur poems jus keep gettin beta and beta. keep it up.
and i hope things get beta for u.

lots of love
sonam

" Now every rain
Reminds me of this pain "
That was a very strong line... great work.. very emotional.. and sad..
Keep writing..
5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

My expectations got burried in the earth,
And joys were blown with the rain.
My love was lost in the crowd,
Now every rain reminds me of this pains...

I feel that I can relate a lot with that stanza =) very well written!! I loved this poem.

Ah just reading the second stanza gives me the most frightening chills up my spine, for that is so beautifully terrifying and sorrowful, it reflects upon how I see the world. A heart-melting poem.

What a fantastic poem, it flows perfectly and the wording you have used is excellent, thanks for your comment meant alot, keep writing and take care hun Sarah x

Wow so much detailing! loved the poem 5/5
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As suprising to anyone i know i can relate quite a bit to this entire poem...i love it and it was a great use of words for creating a picture 5/5

This is wonderful!

Mallori