Wow O_O question: are you by any chance into pain and bondage?

Well thats an idea I had for a short story, but a little different, still going tot write it tho
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Very good peice, pretty unique and very well told. the description and portrayl of the story and very clear and the overall peice very easy to read

5/5

Wow intense and angry and strangly sad. i love the ending. nice job!

This is a pretty good poem...very intense.

Wow .. this is so filled with emotion & the last word comes as a blow to the reader... u get 5/5
love
amy

WOWww...beautiful ending! I love the intense irony in this! At least how I see it, I thought it was very beautiful and powerfully penned. Keep it up! 5/5

Laying into them, armed with fists
They writhe and scream, all alone
Tie the ropes tighter, cutting into their wrists
My eyes filled with fire, my heart with stone

favorite stanza...quite an amazing poem. this is definitely one of my all time favorites, and I like the part where it ends up you really torturing yourself, it sends a strong message.

Ok good poem but completely messed up

Its a really good poem, it flows well and is easy to read, and the concept is great.
keep it up

Great poem!

Good , nice structure and amazing poem

Incorporating yourself into the poem made it spectacular!!! Great write. : )

That ending line was really surprising, but very good. It was so dark, that I but I loved it! You are an excellent writer, 5/5

The first stanza made me think that it was a film, and not real. Then the rest of the poem suggested otherwise.
You used some strong diction and descriptions to portray the violence used.
In the third stanza it should be "their."
Nice twist at the ending too.

Wow the ending definitely suprised me. you are such a great poet. this is one of the best poems i've read. The emotions & the feeling in it all...it was just absolutely amazing. I loved it!! 5/5****

Oh wow that isnt wat i was expecting. this is rly good 5/5 not much to say other than that.

Wow, really wasnt expecting that ending.. really powerfull one here... nice work!