Wow id have to say This is one of your most
Heart-felt Poems Ever
Great job
Good rhyme
Greatly Written
wonderful emotion
10000/5
keep it up
~TPOMH~

Great work. Thats one lucky guy.....

Darkest Wishes,
GA

I scream for ice cream!!! :] a lovely, upbeat and energetic poem. surely to delight and bounce the most sorrowful souls. thanks shiningstar, for all your wonderful and meaninful comments. currently, i have added you to my favorites, so i'll be commenting more frequently. god bless and keep writing with that secret, rare talent you have!

Lissa, you should remember what that title made me think of. "I scream for the first time..." ;)

Lol
do you remember?!

your poems are so awesome. i'm gonna miss reading them first-hand! i don't think i'll ever forgive you for moving halfway across the country!!! :