Comments : No One to Love but Yourself

  • 14 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    I liked it. Its something i can relate to. Awsome job.:D

  • 14 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice, well written with a good flow. i esspessially like the end, it finishes it off very well but still leaves the idea that the concepts within the poem will go on for time to come.

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I really liked the title and the concept. That the ending kind of may mean that everything would repeat itself. I did think you could have added more details to it, though. BUt other than that it was good.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    Quite excellent in my opinion short and sweet but it had alot of emotion and good style as well as an excellent ryhme scheme. i liked it alot :) 5/5
    ~jacob

  • 14 years ago

    by PS

    I like this:
    Mascara stains
    Running from her eyes
    A poisoned mind
    From all of his lies

    great poem. it truly is sad and deep. nice job

  • 14 years ago

    by Sole

    Really great - the short lines make more of an emphasis, and really bring out the meaning, and depth of the poem. Very well written.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 14 years ago

    by jello

    Wow someone must have really hurt you...i'm sorry but this is good. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Allen

    Really good job, that was a great poem... well written, nice rhymes, goood flow.. I love it. well done..

  • 14 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I like how you ended it..

    "A lonely cry
    That was heard by none
    Endless pain
    That had only begun..."

    I think that was a good ending for this poem.

    I give it a 5/5
    Keep it up
    Stay Strong..*

  • 14 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    I must agree with the others- it was a wonderfully written poem. Your poetry always lingers and is always very easy to picture because the imagery is very much alive. A quality I love in your poems...5/5 from me....

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 14 years ago

    by norman

    Nice writing