Your poem is great well done

Aww!! that is so sad!! i loved it! you did a great job expressing your feelings & it really shows. great job! 5/5* keep up the good work!

Very well written peice, very expressive and well written

5/5

THAT WAS THE BEST POEM IHAVE READ ON HERE. BAR NONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
remember my poem is called today and is in poems aout life

Exellent! wow i loved this! i can totally understand what your saying. keep writing!

Wonderfully sweet. the description in teh beginning really makes the pain stand out more. nice job

AWWW!!! That was a great poem.Very well written!!
Tisha~

This poem has a very strong rhtyhm and the structure is excellent, an awesome expression of ur emotion! well done xx

I think that you have a good hand with free style writing

Wow, I am completely blown away by this poem. Its gorgeous. To be truthful it made me cry while I read it. I can relate to that and feel the pain from which it was written.
Great work. Keep up the writting!
xoxox

That is a very sad poem. However, it's very beautiful. This is a truly remarkable write. Keep it up!
Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Wow, You are a great writer, i like the feelin and words you use, i could feel the love and then the pain of loosing that love. 5/5

I love that. this is amazing and sad. i really like it though. i even read it aloud to my friend. amazing poem.

Awwwwww.. this was so sad and sweet.. an excellent write! the emotion was so deep, the flow was good, and the descriptions were brilliant! really great write! 5/5

I really like the way you write will you check me out sometimes thanks.